Wani: Red Pen
Copyedit? QA pass? Alternate directors cut? All three describe this project.
Cavemanon left a fair amount on the table with Wani. It’s a shame. Unimplemented assets, comments on things they wish they did… And while they may have artful writers, the grammar leaves much to be desired in areas.
NOTE: Snoot Core is a compatibility layer for Snoot mods and breaks basegame Wani. Therefore it is also incompatible with this mod. Please disable it.
Alterations include, but are not limited to:
– Rudimentary proofreading,
– Shored up, reworked, or cut innumerable lines, *
– Insertion of new art in chapters 14, 15D, and 17C.
– Patched wonky animations (mostly fixed in base game by now),
– Expanded animation in spots,
– Integration of unused assets where appropriate,
– Swapped cg/bgs out in relevant/contradicting places,
– Implemented dummied out devcode and notes,
– Major rework of soundtrack integration (fill in silent spots that aren’t silent for a good reason, reinforce motifs, etc),
– Minor foley work using creative commons licensed stuff,
– Added switch in options to change which background is used on the main menu,
– Minor improvements to gallery (ordering, full unlock if seen epilogue, etc)
…and zillions of other tweaks and fixes. If you want a full changelog, you’ll have to read the script files yourself. Every chapter of the novel has been touched, and I’ve written extensive margin notes.
* To be clear, this is an unsanctioned fan edit. I have done everything in my power to keep to the soul of the story. Meaning changes exist, but they’re mostly limited. There is only one place I feel I truly overreached, and that’s in E1 (and even then, the soul is maintained). However, opinions can differ, and I don’t know what would be too far for a given reader. Caveat emptor, I suppose.
Special thanks to:
JustDeni – Proofread
Alvo (Reddit: Ok-Nobody-3893) – Additional art
Sebek Fereh Ra – Polish translation
Revisions:
Old revisions of this mod are available below. Click the link to download.
